Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Being in unfavourable situations like having unsatisfactory job or inadequate salary is not always what anyone would want. While some prefer the idea of accepting such circumstances, I believe that people should try to overcome and improve the situation by all means.
On the one hand, I understand why some people may want to give in to the circumstances. Accepting that the bad situation cannot be changed is another way of showing their patience and endurance. These are the types of characteristics that not many people possess, so by adapting themselves to the situation, they can further enhance these characters and become better people. Of course, this can only be applied for cases when people are generally unable to improve the situations. Once they have surpassed the worst scenario, everything else may seem less bad and they may find themselves in a happier life in the end.
On the other hand, I support the view that it is better to try and improve the situations. If it is not the ideal place to commit oneself to work, in the long run, it may negatively affect that person's mental health as well as their well-beings, not to mention being financially unstable also puts them in a difficult situation. We should at least try to find a better solution in order to overcome the problem. My friend, for example, was in a situation once where she earned only very little salary but having to work under such highly demanding condition. Ultimately, she decided to quit her job and find another place that appreciated her skills more. At the end of the day, it is the job satisfaction that matters most, and we are encouraged to seek out for job opportunities that suits us best.
In conclusion, having to endure such unfavourable circumstances is not always an easy task; however, if people are willing to improve the situation instead of accepting and giving in, the results can definitely be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...I support the view that it is better to try and improve the situations. If it is not th...
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Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ork, in the long run, it may negatively affect that persons mental health as well as their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89908256881 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83870467917 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8107893546 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280563691417 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929118741375 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07428030537 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167949751816 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02058820129 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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