People encounter with bad situations by many factors that is hardly controllable during our lives. In fact, home, regional or financial difficulties are indeed hard to be improved. Hence, many suggest that it is more advantageous to accept bad circumstances, however, others contend that effort to improve is better way for self-confidence and inspiration. Overall, this essay will discuss both perspectives with their opinions.
To start with, despite the fact that people are born within different circumstances such as families, countries or even disabled, people strive to attain their needs and goals. However, some things cannot be improved or changed, therefore, some people endeavour unnecessarily. First language does huge role in today’s world in order to step forward to worldwide societies but also many enterprises require advanced English level. In other words, people with non-English background have less opportunities to obtain desired job positions. Moreover, attempting to attain their impossible goals will come back to you with stress and depression. Thus, to prevent such depression or sadness, we should accept what we have and who we are in order to be happier, many argue.
On the other hand, others suggest that there are sufficient welfare systems in most of nations to reduce gap for people who are in needs of assistance. Schemes for job seekers provide more benefits such as financial subsidy and additional scores as well as apart from innate backgrounds, unsatisfactory occupations or poverty can be covered by effort. This is the best advantage of capitalism that anyone has opportunities to accomplish their plans and thus, they attain their demands. Therefore, people could improve their skills and dedicate for future careers in order to reduce such disadvantages.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that we cannot change some things due to different circumstances, some suggest to accept the situations, however, use of great welfare systems and dedication will definitely inspire people to achieve and endeavour to accelerate towards their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...people with non-English background have less opportunities to obtain desired job pos...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the nations') or simply say ''most nations''.
Suggestion: most of the nations; most nations
...there are sufficient welfare systems in most of nations to reduce gap for people who are in nee...
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Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in order to reduce such disadvantages. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest accepting'.
Suggestion: suggest accepting
...gs due to different circumstances, some suggest to accept the situations, however, use of great w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51083591331 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98521053638 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585139318885 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0075047098 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199908149344 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636932448177 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394758313755 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118303133547 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180964111005 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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