Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As time has passed, human rights are arousing issues in many nations over the past years. Hence, some clamour that universities have to accept equal number of male and female in all faculties, however, it is absolutely disadvantageous for some reasons. This essay will discuss in regard to its drawbacks and better solutions.
To start with, despite the fact that male and female must have same opportunities and treated equally in all areas of studies, there would be downsides. First of all, physical strength is required in some subjects. For instance, if you want to become a soldier, fire fighter or police officer, you have to be very strong in order to keep yourself and others. Secondly, it may influence to the pupil rates. More females, for example, tend to attend to course of nursing, however, if half of them are allowed only, 50 per cent of women and only few per cent of men pupils will occupy lecture classes.
To make it clear, it is true that if all criteria of admission are applied equally to applicants apart from gender and faculties, percentages of students will be balanced naturally, as well as it inspires much more than other methods. Last but not least, if few people with different sex are included in workplaces, it is absolutely fine because it is sometimes mandatory in some fields such as police stations or hospitals. If female victim comes to police stations or male injured need to be treated, few can handle with it.
In conclusion, in spite of treatment towards male and female must be equal, it does not have be compulsory in acceptance of tertiary institution for some drawbacks. Therefore, equal criteria for anyone has more positive aspects and it should continue in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 94, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... female must be equal, it does not have be compulsory in acceptance of tertiary in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in regard to, in spite of, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91496598639 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64369531181 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1638763543 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6923076923 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157484634278 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512554250924 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585426085695 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101559841961 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355960136016 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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