In our daily life, we go through many difficult situations which are either resolved or not. Some people argues to escape from harsh realities of life but the others suggest to face it. This essay will discuss the both sides in detail and make personal comments at the end.
Firstly, our life is a run for success which need to pass many hurdles on the way; ie,the more obstacles the higher the peak of success. Difficult situations will provoke our thought process and physical and hormonal changes, which eventually, prepares us to gain success in the game. At some instances people fail in some situations and it will serve as a key to review their performance, ultimately will lead to huge success. For example famous scientists like Pythegorous faced many challenges in his life before he put forwarded his theorums.
Secondly, few people are scared to face hard situations, and they are negatively motivated in those cases, tries to modify the situations to surpass, without actively involving. In those situations they are really missing valuable life lessons,in contrast they are getting a comfort zone without worries.
From my point of view, difficult situations are the real teachers in our life, which has potential role in our life. We should jump in to this caos, but with extreme precautions to avoid any possible damages, enables us to gain confidence in other simile situations. Keeping always safe ourself will not make any positive growth in our life, but only make us coward and decline our capability.
Overall taking chances in unusual and difficult situations are strictly personal and both sides have their own striking points. With proper planning and studies and organised approach can solve hard situations in an easy way with valuable lessons for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest facing'.
Suggestion: suggest facing
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Suggestion: , the
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...are really missing valuable life lessons,in contrast they are getting a comfort zon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ithout worries. From my point of view, difficult situations are the real teache...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur life. We should jump in to this caos, but with extreme precautions to avoid an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ituations are strictly personal and both sides have their own striking points. Wi...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ised approach can solve hard situations in an easy way with valuable lessons for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07118644068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55676379045 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9276119211 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776333172733 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030589248844 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358139611483 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047164984131 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264399997664 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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