Some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs. While other believe that it is better to focus on one job.disscuss both side and give your opinion?
With the rise in modernisation a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in jungles to take first step on the noon.never the less there are some issues which remain and as complex as ever for instance and the given topic assert that which job is concerned better in this compititive world,single job or multiple job I shall this explore the demension of this world through that example and assertion moreover shape up my opinion by the.
On one side the argument talking there is a group who believe that they are so many benefits of single jod they strengthen their view point by claim that lot of benifits of single job every person would like achieve a good job for own earning sources.main benefit of single job employers are properly focus on job they are secure well and no any extra burden on our mind according to survey single jod is more beneficial as to compare multiple jobs. Because if people do single job they are maintaine good health and save time for own faimly activities.
Contrary to this, there is an opinion group of people who believe they are so many benifits of multiple jobs for people. Some people believe in do multiple jobs earning because money is very important thing in our life, some people doing multiple jobs and they are multitalented people and lot toll of varieties moreover improve knowledge and polish our personal skills.
Never the less both the options I believe that there no single condess. I take this grown that use of hands.it depend on person to person and depend on needs.
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| 2018-06-21 | Bhinder Raman | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , single
...ncerned better in this compititive world,single job or multiple job I shall this explor...
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Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...sertion moreover shape up my opinion by the. On one side the argument talking there...
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Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...it of single job employers are properly focus on job they are secure well and no any ...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...y focus on job they are secure well and no any extra burden on our mind according ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...wledge and polish our personal skills. Never the less both the options I believe tha...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
... I take this grown that use of hands.it depend on person to person and depend on needs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47014838782 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.783836719 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.25 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297186833101 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122593247786 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848959778849 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165345534349 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090747126124 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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