The chart below about womans continue work after they have children?the chart shows four different age of group?
The circular charts reveal the information about the woman continue work. after they have children and with four different children categories. The data is calibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented,
It can be seen that in category (0-2) year children and women do the not any work because she is only caring her baby, furthermore during the (3-4) years age children then (37%) woman has do the part time work for complete her babies basic needs, Apart from all this during the year of (5-9) babies after that (25%) woman has been 'done' then full time work because her baby busy in own study, furthermore in age group (5-9) years woman working has not working,part time work,full time was is (25%),(40%) and (35%) woman's respectively.
As far as trend is concerned that in during
The age group 10 years children then only (10%) woman has do not any work. However (45%) woman's has been do the part time job, and equal woman's is do the full time work moreover in age group (3-4) years children then women's has not working, full time work, part time work has been (78%),(10%),and (12%) woman's respectively.
Over, it is evident that in age group (0-2) mostly woman has been free for her babies caring compare as to other age of groups.
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| 2018-06-23 | Bhinder Raman | 73 | view |
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| 2018-06-23 | Bhinder Raman | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ormation about the woman continue work. after they have children and with four differ...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...4 years age children then 37% woman has do the part time work for complete her bab...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... age children then 37% woman has do the part time work for complete her babies basic need...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... after that 25% woman has been done then full time work because her baby busy in ...
^^
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...fter that 25% woman has been done then full time work because her baby busy in own study...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , part
... 5-9 years woman working has not working,part time work,full time was is 25%,40% and ...
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Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...5-9 years woman working has not working,part time work,full time was is 25%,40% and 35% w...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , full
...n working has not working,part time work,full time was is 25%,40% and 35% womans resp...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... working has not working,part time work,full time was is 25%,40% and 35% womans respectiv...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is 25%,40% and 35% womans respectively. As far as trend is concerned that in durin...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...far as trend is concerned that in during The age group 10 years children then onl...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... years children then only 10% woman has do not any work. However 45% womans has be...
^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...hen only 10% woman has do not any work. However 45% womans has been do the part time jo...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...t any work. However 45% womans has been do the part time job, and equal womans is ...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ork. However 45% womans has been do the part time job, and equal womans is do the full ti...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... the part time job, and equal womans is do the full time work moreover in age grou...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rt time job, and equal womans is do the full time work moreover in age group 3-4 years ch...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s children then womens has not working, full time work, part time work has been 78%,10%,a...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...womens has not working, full time work, part time work has been 78%,10%,and 12% womans re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, then, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62100456621 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41493376504 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488584474886 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.028601393 43.030603864 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336081488278 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218496791889 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943063696773 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187972234252 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147762682273 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.