Some people believe that it is good to share information in research, business and the academic world. Some others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some that data in fields such as research, business and academic needs to be made available to anyone. However, others think that it is indiscretion to allow some valuable or sensitive information to be shared without restriction. From my point of view, important information should be only available to people who are responsible and able to handle it.
On one hand, data should not be withhold, especially something that affects the lives of many people and they have the right to know. In terms of human kind collective knowledge, the freely shared information will encourage people to constantly develop and enrich the world's wealth of knowledge. Hence, those pieces of information will benefit the whole society, not just a small group of people that discovered them. For example, the discovery of a new material that can reduce the strain on current natural resources will have a bigger impact on the globe if that material make-up is available to everyone, every country than when it is monopolized by only one firm or country.
On the other hand, it will be careless to let all pieces of sensitive information to be known by the general public. When considering important information like trade secrets, it will be detrimental to let everyone knows as it will reduce the producer's profit and discourage creativity and innovation in the process. If people cannot protect or benefit from their inventions, why they should ever put effort on them at all ? Furthermore, some sensitive information can fall in the hand of bad people. information on weapon research, genetic modification, for instance, will be the cause of great concern if terrorist groups can get their hand on them and use them against civilians.
In conclusion, while some information should be shared to better the society, it is crucial that sensitive and vital data be kept secure in the hand of the right people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...le to constantly develop and enrich the worlds wealth of knowledge. Hence, those piece...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ensitive information to be known by the general public. When considering important information...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Information
...ion can fall in the hand of bad people. information on weapon research, genetic modificatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03144654088 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80316697837 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3971790614 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273155984011 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110410727201 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753195102441 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193116968015 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888451012252 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.