While sharing information knowledge will be increase and some people believe that scientific information business and academic related information should be shared very freely. others opinion, that it is better to keep information very confidential. In my opinion, there is many benefit and drawbacks are available.
On one hand, sharing information will increase knowledge and up to date update the new invention in medical, business, research and new technology. Its helps to develop there knowledge and for the betterment of the society. The invention of stem cells, nano technology, AI and mobile technology to sharing such useful invention and information helps the students to be up to date with the recent procedures and become much better professionals.
On the other hand, sharing to much information can be dangerous. For example research related to weapons and nuclear science is extremely sensitive and confidential. If it is get information with wrong person, they sale it other country for big amount and it is not safety for our country,terrorist may attack our country and our country economic may fallen down. We have to face economic crises and will increase unemployment problem, many people loss their jobs and very competitive edge.
To conclude, my opinion is a neutral one. It is extremely very important for the sharing information student, science and business level, but it is equally crucial to safeguard the information that is sensitive to companies and the country.
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 56
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Others
...formation should be shared very freely. others opinion, that it is better to keep info...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...y confidential. In my opinion, there is many benefit and drawbacks are available. On one ...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ase knowledge and up to date update the new invention in medical, business, research and new ...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ssionals. On the other hand, sharing to much information can be dangerous. For ...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , terrorist
...unt and it is not safety for our country,terrorist may attack our country and our country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37711864407 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02382987499 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7947298867 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294940711973 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107396466662 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130535020087 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190436688286 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106916095787 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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