some people believe it is good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries and other believe that other working of the same company.
Money is the west discovery of human life,but it is a most trusted material to test human nature.Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever.For instance,the given topic asserts that who deserve to get high salary; senior management or workers? Through this sassy ,I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end .
On one side ,there is a group of people who believe that high salary is better for senior management.They strengthen their view point by claiming that senior management are well qualified instead of their workers and they use their knowledge to develop their economy as well as company fame all around the world. Apart from all this ,senior management employer have good skill to cope the problems and make co-ordination between their co-workers as well as they have alot of burden to fulfill their responsibilities towards job .Last but not least ,senior management employer who have alot of experience, they doing their job continuesly long time and with the hardwork they achieve this job after the experience which they get in one field and with the hardwork.
Contrary to this ,there is an opposing group of people who believe that workers of same company also deserve similar salary which senior management employers get in same organization. To make their arguments convincing, they claim that workers do hardwork without watching time ,they follow all rules and regulations which company impose in the organization. Moving further, workers also enhance their skills and do work in different fields, when they are not satisfied from their work then they skip their job and join in other organization this way they also get job experience.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options ,I believe that there is no single conclusion.However, organization make balance between senior management and workers, without workers and senior management they cannot achieve fulfill their responsibilities as well as cannot achieve their goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28134556575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95726049732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1528013391 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.875 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.875 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191158228414 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898866282125 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657416100356 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115709524539 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269013876085 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.