International migration in UK
To begin with, in 1999 over 450000 people came to live in UK and the number of people who emigrated stood at 290000 . While, the figure for net migration was 190000 and it remained content in 2000. Moreover, from 1999 to 2004 the immediation rate rose by 150000 people but there was a much smaller rise in emigration and net migration reached at peak point in 2004. Moving further, the rate of immigration remained high but the number of people emigration fluctuation and reached at 430000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240000 in 2007 but fell back to around 160000 in 2008.
Overall, both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown but the figure immigration significant higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, while, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78358208955 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50983251618 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8440103859 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127252017863 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688784188014 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502475152776 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973881858947 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249843850866 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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