Some people believe that it is necessary to give gifts and presents to friends and family to illustrate that we care about them. However the question if not entirely straightforward, arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support the idea of presenting the gifts to people claim that humans can consolidate their relationships with their acquaintances and family members with giving presents. This range from the showing affection to improve closeness.
For instance, a person who is celebrating it's birthday. In this day,if someone gives a present or gifts to ownership of the birthday who family members or friends,they can make this person delight. And they can illustrate their love or affection to that human with presenting the largesse.
In addition, a human who shares the presents with it's families or acquaintances claim that ,this person is respected by his or her closes. As a consequence ,their relationships can be increased.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that, there are better solutions to show affection to others. Examples can be seem in helping to each other as well as saving the money.
For example, the friends who are not close with each other,can be seem in support themselves especially when they are overcoming the life obstacles. As a result ,they can fortify their relationships out of any kind of unaffordable gifts.
Furthermore, Although their families' financial circumstances are poor, the money is wasted by minority of people to purchase the largesse to give someone.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, there are bountiful sort of to show their love or affection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, sort of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08391608392 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91843912201 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7683528457 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258106869994 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898481888229 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116202176752 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119750767645 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994063481637 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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