Some people believe that the latest technology is creating a divide betwwen rich and poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In this day and age, technology is genuinely becoming more and more state of the art, however, the more up-to-date it is, the more costly it will be. Hence, there has been a long standing arguement that this development is raising the differentiation betwwen the rich people and the poor one. I strongly agree with this point and the following essay aims to discussing the statement and giving my explanations.
To commence with, more and more people now are willing to spend much money on the cutting-edge technology that make their life more convenient and advantageous, as a result, it's understandable when they're proud of their proper and feel themselves overweigh another one. Subsequently, it is considered to be actually negative and harmful to the general public for various aspects of life. For the most part, the point of presenting the growing divide between the well-off and the indigent class of society, due to the existence of lates development in technology can cause to severe consequences in terms of humanity. For instance, in many Vietnamese schools, students probably love to join in a group of friends who have the same family's background.
Another point to make is that the vast of major tends to identify or judge others through their accessory and financial features relating to technology, such as a latest Iphone15 as well as a smart watch worn on their wrist, to differentiate that whether he or she is wealthy or not. By that means, some people who don't have any ability to approach to these innovtuions are likely to be suffered from several social issues. For example, individuals who can not own technology may be much shy, eventually isolation themselves from community beacuase of self-consciousness.
In summary, it is universally accepted that the phenomenon of developing technology is surely a crucial tool to enhance countries' economy and technical science, however, from my own perspective, i constantly beleive that the dark side of this case, to a large extent, leads to the increasing divide among social positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10059171598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0136182392 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600591715976 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3702949991 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.727272727 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131909638159 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453320447782 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412813595372 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737297973277 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020563649833 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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