Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many are of the opinion that private-life insights of renowned individuals should be wildly-shared to the public on social media while others contend that privacy is the primary right which each of us worth receiving, so it’s essential to brush this perspective off. This essay aims to discuss the logic behind both viewpoints and presents why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On the one hand, those who are in favor of the former have their own reasoning. Publishing news about influencers brings us a positive impact on mindset. More specifically, if the young delve a deeper insights into how the famous can become successful and how their real life conduct, they might be well-aware that life is not all moonlight and roses, unless everyone make a lot of efforts, they won’t reach the pinnacle of career. From there, adolescents would take nothing for rented and always be encouraged to get over difficulties so that fulfilling goals and dreams.
On the other hand, it’s also understandable why others believe that bringing personal life of celebrities out is harmful. One of the most convincing reasons is that those who are violated privacy would be put under pressure and do not have freedom. They always have to act and live as a role model, and do not make mistakes. Otherwise, criticism and being stroke out is what they got in return. As a result, they are more likely to get mental health-related problems such as stress, depression and so on. Apart from that, public figures may suffer from the risk of encountering some with bad intentions, misusing their images for negative purposes. For example, in Vietnam, there was an artist whose camera was hacked in her home and her sensitive pictures on sale online. Eventually, she has retired and contemplating suicide.
In conclusion, both views have their own rationales. However, on balance, I side with the view that we should not invade and respect influencer’s personal life because it’s one of the fundamental rights of a person and they deserve enjoying their life comfortably.
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- Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to enjoy'.
Suggestion: to enjoy
...tal rights of a person and they deserve enjoying their life comfortably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03790087464 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78741292248 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620991253644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9565290737 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169680835 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474292100468 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433412660503 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103854115085 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501319577976 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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