some people believe that nature is more important than nurture. to what extent do you agree?
Trying to separate out nature and nurture as explanations for human’s behaviors is now said to be both impossible and unproductive since human beings’ behavioral patterns seem to be highly complex. While researchers are aware of the complexity of gene-environment interaction, the nature or nurture model persists as a simple way of framing discussion on the causes of behavior, this essay will examine both sides of the debate.
To begin with, genes are known to be the basic and functional units of heredity. Some believe that humans have been influences by their genome and recently some modern debates have centered around the effects of genes have on human disposition as opposed to the influences the environment and upbringing may have. To substantiate, several studies conducted on twins separated shortly after their birth reveal that genetics do play a crucial part in the development of certain personality characteristics, sexual orientation and etc. Besides, mental health conditions including schizophrenia, depression and something alike have been more likely to develop when their genealogy shows their traces in the family even if the mental illnesses should not be considered merely as the result of abnormal or defective genes, since environment has had major impacts on people, too.
Despite the significance of heredity and nature on people’s behavior and persona, other have begun to question its thorough validity, because one cannot deny the effects of family, environment, and the personal acquisition. The detractors of genetic traits as the dominant factors in forming one’s characters insist that being raised in broken home, dysfunctional family and deprived condition may result in some anti-social behavior which needn’t be necessarily inherited or determined by genes. Not only does healthy condition help a person to behave better, but also acquired personalities and behavioral features can be the direct results of the environment people belong or are living in. although it is said that the personality of a person is formed in their childhood and in their formative years, an adult person needs string motivation and fulfilling incentives to behave properly in different or even challenging conditions. If a person cannot find those satisfying factors in the environment they are, they may tend to act differently or worse aggressively despite their calm nature. On the other hand, contemporary world is where one is permanently exposed to aggression, tyranny, unpleasant war news, manslaughter, and violence reported on media; so the inevitability of violence and aggressive manner has been risen even if that human’s conduct is not regarded as an innate part of one’s being. Moreover, the more violent TV programs or computer games people are involved in, the more anti-social behavior people intend to do.
- The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give 78
- In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees Not all students can afford the so some people think that university education should be free for everyone To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- the role of teachers in classroom 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...On the other hand, contemporary world is where one is permanently exposed to aggr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48306997743 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04284920029 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598194130926 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8113463826 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.846153846 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0769230769 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112103427931 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409579802205 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047633797477 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727666094328 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00784406938005 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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