Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that some prisoners who behave themselves adequate for the rules should be relaxed from bans and permitted to do unpaid job in order to aid society. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and I believe that it is twofold beneficial for both community and criminals.
Actually , keeping criminals in prison costs as a frugal to country. Because, government usually splurge it's fiscal for supplying food, clothes and providing them adequate conditions like health care or other services. So, lifting or just relaxing restrictions from the prisoners and sending them to unpaid works would be step in the right direction . As a result, authorities can easily eschew the waste of money for the prisoners' expenditure and this would have many pliable results to criminals as well.
From the social perspectives, spurring to work free consoles the rehabilitation process of criminals . It can make a great contribution to the phase of returning them into real-life , because, while working , prisoners improve their harmony, teamwork skills and can be taught interpersonal skills. Apart from that, robustly surveillance under criminals makes them more law obedient. In terms of health,encouraging them to work might bring enormous benefits. The reason behind this is that , rather spending stretch of hours on sitting cage and become physically faltered, working might strengthen their bones and muscles ,boost blood circulation and even bolster up flexibility. Hence swift actions intended to urge them to do unpaid job should be carried out as much as possible.
In conclusion, prisoners should be sent to community work robustly, and I reckon that it is the preeminent way to aid both society and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98068705459 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6119362063 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332364947607 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104421065968 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753278688929 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196667836615 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429426924937 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.