In recent times most of the debated issues related to availability of choices. Some assert that in today's era, more choices are available for people. However, I strongly believe that most of the times, people have too many options, while deciding particular things, but there are some areas at which minimal choices are available for citizens.
On the one side of the argument there are people who reason that people have too many options in present time compared with past era. First and foremost, the introduction of globalization concept had been converted world market into single market in result of that foreign players are allowed to introduce their products and services to local markets, which creates close competition between companies. For example, In India, only few mode of transportation were used in past, but in present time people have number of option to travel from one place to another place. The second point in this context is that technology related developments gives too many options to people to decide what should be better for them. To exemplify, school was the only option available for students to gain knowledge about subjects, but nowadays people can learn through virtual classes or playing games or puzzles on their smart devices.
On the other hand, there are some sectors or regions, where they have only few choices to decide particular things. According to them, those regions, which are located extremely far from the city area, at where infrastructure facilities are not developed, have only option to buy products from their local areas. Further, there are some sectors in which people prefer to buy the same products or services, which the experts suggest. To illustrate, in medical treatment, only few procedures are available to diagnose specific disease.
To conclude, in my opinion there are some disciplines in which more choices are required to decide unique things like fashion, automobile, and many more, but undeveloped region or villages have only one or two options to fulfil their wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few modes
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Suggestion: in the past
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Suggestion:
...ated developments gives too many options to people to decide what should be bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18373493976 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5517346287 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8781712798 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21478030558 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803896509075 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069270684011 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12863155181 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406263160478 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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