It is generally considered that we have diverse choices at present time, I totally agree with this statement that is stemmed from recent advances in information technology and increasing of life quality. And I will also explain my view in this essay.
On the one hand, because of the incredible speed in the spread of the internet and the improvement of information technology, the expanded internet job market have a great demand for talents. Furthermore, the recruitment demand information in industry, agriculture and service field transfer faster than ever before. For the reason mentioned above, demands are much more than talent supply and people have a large amount of different working opportunity.
On the other hand, several decades ago, whether the job could feed family might influence people a lot, this made people have no choice but giving up their initial dream. only rare people could change their career, most of them just struggle for their life. But, at present, more and more areas and countries could ensure the quality of life, such as food, welfare, infrastructure and opportunity of receiving high education, to their residents. Therefore, not only life pressure won’t be heavy like before, but also there are a variety of choices and direction for people.
To sum up, I firmly agree that revolutionary advancement in modern technology, which is an inner characteristic of human give them this opportunity to have many items for choosing many available options in different aspects of their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...oice but giving up their initial dream. only rare people could change their career, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23170731707 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79607727352 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9895444607 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.7 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152819874314 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563313757265 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560372687399 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10022522465 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509452149479 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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