Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Life is about choices whether you like it or not, you must choose to continue living. Recently, the choices are getting more and more overwhelmed people in the world because of technological advancement bring everything in their palm instantly. Consequently, some people confuse to choose even for a small thing that has almost no significant impact on their life. In this essay, I absolutely agree that today, people flood by a lot of choices.
To begin with, in advanced technology, a smartphone has provided many things. By swiping your finger, you can order many kinds of foods in your hand. Indeed, a lot more choices may make you cancelled them because you confuse to take which food satisfy your appetite. In addition, in a group of teenagers, choosing the right food to eat can lead to fighting when they do not find agreement. Many choices are like rubbish which may ruin a friendship.
In a way people decide something which has a more significant impact on their lives, more choices may persuade people to make careless, even, mistaken decisions. Options should give more solutions to resolve problems than to make it more difficulties to decide. For instance, in this modern era, it is easier to choose our future wife because communication infrastructure using a smartphone is well-built to get to know personally. Furthermore, the more girls we dated, the more complicated the relationship will occur. It will not ease us to decide who will be our wife but add more wrong choices about our future wife.
Taking all this into consideration, I believe that we have many decisions to take and not need to be confused about those.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93525179856 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80721231313 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0579289531 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176123664072 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619456833859 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515959855691 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116384224833 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047305405804 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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