Percentage of Australian man and woman who did physical activity
The bar charts give information about proportion of Australian people who did routine physical activit. Overall, it is clear that the proportion for women were higher than men. Women experienced a upward trend, while men showed a first downward then upward trend. For women, most high figure was 53,3 percent that was age of 55 to 64. In cintrast, lower rate was 47,1 percent that was occured among 65 and over. However, between 15to 24 doing workout was 47,7 percent that was almost similar with elder people. Also, among age group 25 to 34 and 35 to 44, the activity rate rose approximately by 5 percent that was largest growth in women age group. As men, doing exercise’s highest percentage was relatively earth age of 15 to 24 by 52,8 percent, while smallest figure of men was 39,5 percent which was happened age from 35 to 44. In 65 and iver age, both men and women who had physically active was around similar percent 47,1 and 46,7 respectively. However, between age groups from 25 to 64, women doing routine was fairly increased compared with men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...were higher than men. Women experienced a upward trend, while men showed a first ...
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Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'workout' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'workouts'.
Suggestion: workouts
...nd over. However, between 15to 24 doing workout was 47,7 percent that was almost simila...
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Line 1, column 612, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the largest'.
Suggestion: was the largest
...te rose approximately by 5 percent that was largest growth in women age group. As men, doin...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earthed'.
Suggestion: earthed
...pos;s highest percentage was relatively earth age of 15 to 24 by 52,8 percent, while ...
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Line 1, column 754, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the smallest'.
Suggestion: while the smallest
... earth age of 15 to 24 by 52,8 percent, while smallest figure of men was 39,5 percent which wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4980927714 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7994082788 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922162672983 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467803227511 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806406770137 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922162672983 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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