Some people believe that overpopulation is the main problem.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? What are the causes of overpopulation?
Nowadays, overpopulation is the important problem in the world. There are different causes of overpopulation, one of the consequence, died people's figures are gradually decreasing then borned people's numbers are drammatically growing day by day. Unfortunately, this situation is probably becoming several troubles us, an example, it is related to economy and society.
I totally agree with this condition this is why we can see overpopulation is the bad one plenty of countries. Especially, china and indias' population is the top of degree about it therefore their government can ban to born baby in their country considerably, this causes lack of area for living people thus indian people has certainly staying in the street or near the river.
On the other hand, overpopulation is increasing and it is becoming joblessness for people that they are unemployment around the world. It affects different each people why some people maybe persuading unemployment themselves however others enter the various bad ways a one example, afterwards crime and theft or burglary have drammatically increasing in our lives. Clearly, we can be seen that from this statement it is connected to society and economy especially, environment has a different pollution by overpopulation. On the one hand, poor people have not money for food, for this reason, they have not job however the are willing to work and not adequate work and working place.
In concusion, overpopulation is growing now and medicine improve considerably in result people are living a long time. I think that nobody ever stop this condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29527559055 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14370756684 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3792718274 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25267701211 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097743379507 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563769164881 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151478771264 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270480888282 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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