Some people believe that overpopulation is the main problem.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? What are the causes of overpopulation?
As a consequence of constant growth in the amount of world population, the world has encountered several problems. Therefore, according to some, overpopulation is considered as the major issue. I personally agree with this statement since overpopulation causes severe problems in terms of environment as well as rise in unemployment.
In my view, overpopulation is the major issue that is concerned by the human race. One of the reasons why it is so serious is that this can contribute to adverse environmental problems. The majority of people are using natural resources and not eco-friendly factories along with cars, thus it can lead to the emission of harmful gases into the atmosphere. Another reason is that owing to the continued rise in population, there might be huge growth in unemployment. If the number of people, who are willing to work, exceeds that of the workplace available, those people may struggle to find an occupation. As a result of the joblessness, the rate of crime and theft may increase which can trigger certain barriers to people.
In conclusion, the significant growth in the world population is caused by recent advances in the medical field and improvements in the agricultural sector. Unfortunately, this is a worrying trend which may cause severe drawbacks in the future if certain measures are not taken.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17431192661 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17810136012 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1503314136 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.545454545 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211526176815 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737513572175 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924911650169 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144093110218 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928476895523 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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