Exercise is the tremendous way to improve physical fitness for every individual. A group of people think that it is a resposibility of parents to encounrage their children To do exercise, while other advocate that it is prime Accountibility of school. I believe that it is obligation of both to do this phenomenal activity and maintain their physical well-being. This essay will discuss both the aforementioned view in subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, parents are primary teacher of children to teach them every things in their life. Thus, it is better to educate them Regarding exercise and improve their overall quality of life. Moreover, children learn everything at very little age and they can grasp everything very swiftly. They can obey their parents if they encourage them towards healthy and active life rather than sedentary life style. To epitome, a child can improv health by watching their parents to do exercise. Numerous study show that morning exercise for children can help them to enhance their academic skill.
On the other hand, novices at school can see their classmate doing exercise and they also get motivation to do. Nowadays children are spending theri much of the time with their educators, therefore they obey them and encourage other to do physical activities. Addictionally, schools are changing plenty of money from the parents for fullday school, so that it is also a prime accountibility of institution to encounrage their pupils.
To close the discussion, I pen down saying that it is a resposibility of school and parents to encourage children as it has marvelous health benefits.
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- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students Is physical education important in the 21st century Should physical education classes be required or optional 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he discussion, I pen down saying that it is a resposibility of school and parents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18560606061 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8800610223 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3684489868 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29925753016 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107573649054 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423971597521 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192386613005 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433412611953 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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