It is undeniable truth to say that internet shrunk the world. Internet provide us numerous benefits and it the best invention in the history of mankind. Some are believe that newspaper are the best way to get information about what is happening around the world, while others think that internet is the best way to get new and updates regarding news things. This essay will discuss both the aforementioned Views. I, however, believe that internet is the best way to get informative update.
On the one hand, we are living in global village where we can talk, and get information in any corner of the world. Reading news is very essential for everyone as is provides plenty of update and news. Moreover, with the help of internet people can purchase any e-newspaper without any cost and very convenient way. In this digital era everyone has internet connection in his or her phone so it is far better to them to read news online.
On the other hand, purchase newspaper is getting harmful effect on environment as plethora amount of trees are cutting down dur to manufacturing of news paper. Furthermore, cost of the newspaper are shoulder on public as they have to pay for it. However, it provides employment to thousands of people, we should not ignore the fact of deforestation.
To recapitulate, i reiterate to say that the internet has myriads of benefits and people can lean new things, get daily updates and infromation from it.
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- Now big cities have many problems What are these problems Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ion in the history of mankind. Some are believe that newspaper are the best way to get ...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...ion in the history of mankind. Some are believe that newspaper are the best way to get ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun update seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of updates'.
Suggestion: plenty of updates
...y essential for everyone as is provides plenty of update and news. Moreover, with the help of in...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...re cutting down dur to manufacturing of news paper. Furthermore, cost of the newspaper are...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of deforestation. To recapitulate, i reiterate to say that the internet has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73563205408 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7024125886 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275514541341 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090437943584 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842030966156 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150934273282 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102130794332 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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