Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different viewpoints about whether parents should spend the amount of their time on assisting their children in doing homework assignments or playing sports with them. In my perspective, it could be better off instructing their children to complete schoolwork.
There are several compelling reasons why children should be given instructions by there parents when doing homework. First and foremost, since most children are assigned many tasks consisting of various subjects simultaneously and they must be done on deadline, their parental support is vitally needed. In fact, some tasks require a solid foundation and creative thinking skills like mathematics and science, which implies that without help, children would not implement alone. Secondly, by assisting their children with any difficulties they have with their work, parents make children’s tasks less demanding and challenging to some extent. This results in greater interest in classroom and leads to better grades in the long run.
Nevertheless, I would agree with those who believe that parents should sacrifice their own time in part for their children in order to play sports with them. The main reasons for this view is that parents play an indispensable role in cultivating and orientating their children’s personality and well-being properly. For instance, by participating in sports such as running, footsteps, tennis, etc. together, the relationship between parents and children could be more bonding and attachable, whereas schoolwork could be done thanks to other help like tutor. Another reason for this opinion is that children should be encouraged to be more self-independent rather than rely on their parental help, they could therefore enhance and develop a variety of valuable skills such as critical thinking, independence, problem solving, etc.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why parents should be more supportive to their children, but in my opinion involving in sports together is more crucial to build a bond among family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60576923077 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94243861783 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0089932741 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.538461538 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416848453193 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150604006394 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10616452774 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271907813678 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480541053532 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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