When discussing about the policy on education and training, it is often believed that the national and local authority should provide a free higher educational system for every citizen. In this essay, I would like to examine this viewpoint and provide my personal conclusion.
To begin with, it is a matter of fact that education is along process that not only provides us with basic skills such as literacy and numeracy but is also essential in shaping our future lives. For example, for those students who want to work as an accountant and auditor can certainly be required to graduate from advanced university or college in accounting and finance. Moreover, in many countries, there are a lot of students dropping out their course especially those who are living in poor countryside or remote mountain areas because of not being affordable to cover their tuition fees in their universities or colleges. As a result, if the government provided to people a free higher educational system, it can be an equal great opportunity for every citizen to acquire a lot of professional knowledge and enhance important skills in order to secure a good job or even change their lives better in the future.
However, it should also be borne in mind that as education system is already underfunded in many countries including Vietnam, governments certainly do not have enough financial resources to provide the free higher educational services for their citizens. At the same time, it is also true that the decision of continuing to enrol on some courses in university or college depends mostly on student’s ability to learn. To be more specific, some students are excel in certain fields such as sciences or the art usually tend to try their best to acquire a lot of knowledge and skills in university where they can be taught more professional, while the others, who do not have interested in these fields, choose to work immediately since they have left high school. Therefore, these two facts mean that providing a free educational system is a measure that is mostly only good in theory and it can cause the authority to waste a lot of money.
In conclusion, I personally believe that although the government should not pay for the tuition fee in university of people, excellent students or poor students should be given the scholarship from their university or government grant to cover these fees.
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- Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language To what estent do you agree with this statement 73
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98258706468 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77690501375 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9386051506 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.090909091 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5454545455 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207394001017 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790056062706 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535960167214 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129509395367 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317995231455 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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