Education is the fundamental right over child. It eads to an individual progress. I think everyone should obtain University education, but other believe University education should be free for each one by government. However, I differ to this statement and I give my opinion in the following paragraph.
Initially, the higher education gives a lot of skills of children such as cooperation, leadership, communication and so on, it is make very utility for the future. However, now days most jobs require a specific knowledgeand skills which knowledge and skills gives a better salary. In addition, you can be make a good quality of life. Secondly, a degree can open the doors to better employment prospects, however skill workers are inevitable for sectors such as Information Technology and Engineering. For instance, Dheeraj Patel it is a big businessman in the Gujarat who completed only chemical engineering but he has a lot of skill and in the present days he has net value 75 lhakhs each year.
On the other hand, University education should not free for everyone because many reasons. First, government do a lot of money invest into the make new University College, pay high salary of the teachers and excepts some modern equipment or provide facilities, but if they do free of cost that this type of facility are not possible. Besides, some reach person can be pay University as well as tuition fee but it is not a probable for poor people, If education become a free that is a big effect on the country economy.
In conclude, it can be finally said that the issue of government should not free the University education, but they should diminish University fees and tuition fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95438596491 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86956627173 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0830708995 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192317106481 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690922191668 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630176849557 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13125576459 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575013647728 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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