Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
Intelligence is a complex topic widely debated nowadays. There has been a significant controversy in the academic community regarding this, which leaves a feeling of uncertainty all around the world. While some would argue that genetic factors are the most relevant aspects of defining a person's intelligence, others believe that their environment is most responsible for this trait.
Firstly, we need to consider scientific pieces of evidence that prove the existence of genetic influence on someone's intelligence. This was only possible through the development of the IQ testing since it created an assessment method to measure intellect. As a result, scientists have developed numerous researches, proving that the ability to learn a skill or a subject is intrinsically related to genes and, therefore, it is inherited from the parents.
However, the environment itself can also have a major influence on this matter. For instance, having a high level of education is a vital aspect to define intelligence. This is illustrated through the example of an uneducated person, he may have the genetics in his favour, but without the information and knowledge, the possibilities of being considered smart are relatively lower. Moreover, external factors such as drugs, alcohol and poor nutrition also can impact negatively one's intelligence, as they damage considerably the cognitive system.
In conclusion, I personally believe both aspects are extremely relevant to defining human intelligence, as many researchers have already proven. Although genetics play a critical role, I would argue that the environment can be a more substantial aspect outweighing the former as it can impact more both positively and negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55893536122 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16320103168 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3100735104 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177112820758 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599976344212 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905533268654 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11023176061 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106174508372 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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