It is mandatory for the students that they give more attention towards all subjects rather than one. However, critics believe that it is best for teenager if they more focus on subjects in which they are interested. This essay will discuss both these statements. In my opinion the students should focus on the one subject only because of the following reasons.
on the one hand, it is best for all the pupils, if they learn all the subject in school: English, physical education, computer etcetera.it is because, the students will get more knowledge about the different kind of things, aspects and resources as, in school numerous kind of subjects are taught to pupils. Which leads to increase in knowledge of learners. In addition to it, the understanding of every subject is compulsory for them in order to understand the conversation of other people and to communicate with other religious' people. Because of this, discrimination problem would be vanishe from the nation.
On the flip side, the teenager should focus on the subject in which they are best or in which they have more interest because, if the students concentrate on the few subjects rather than the more, then they could score good in their academic subjects and can make their career strong and get the opportunity of the professional job. For example, if a student have interest in science field then he or she can achieve his or her goal in that specific field: medical science. Which assists in choosing their dream job without any confusion.
In conclusion, the students should focus on their interested subject only because, it makes them more creative and makes the students multi-talented and give them one direction in which they can make their career strong.
- Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, Others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and Bank cards eventually we will have cashless society which will we safer and more convenient one extent do you agree or disagree 71
- Some say that economic development is the solution to poverty; others say it is the cause of poverty. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64867544842 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.4577667541 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323723693512 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115222789835 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100717178043 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209096151977 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802940948559 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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