Some people believe that playing a msusical instrument can be beneficial in many different way other think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument . Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Playing musical is best medium to rejuvenate the mind and soul. Whereas, music also related to tradition or culture. The given topic asserts that playing a musical instrument, beneficial or not? Through this easy,i will explore the dimension of this topic and shape up my opinion at the end.
On the one hand, there is a group of people believe that playing a musical instrument is benifical for people. Broadly speaking, there is three main advantage . The first and foremost is relaxation, however when people play the musical instrument in the free time .so, music help the remove the stress in the mind. Moving further, music class help the people to bring out there hidden talents ,and they perform the musical activities front of the world, also in the class they know the other instruments. Moreover , people are more professional, they are creative the new music lyrics.
On the other hand , why other people think that it is not beneficial? However, parents thinks that music lesson is extra burden in the children mind.becouse it is not a academic subject , basically it depend on people choice,and peole add this subject in the academic module. Likewise some people reveals that carter is not good,because government not provide the much opportunity in this stream.
To sum up, this question has many answering , it is depend on people thinking , however I believe that music is stress buster , and it also depend on person to person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, broadly speaking, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98340248963 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57534422802 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9768482083 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29530273428 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113151055464 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860949612966 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165245334554 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459124433487 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.