The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

The bar chart or linear chart depicts the information of number of temperature and precipitation in Kolkata city during the particular period of a month. The data is Callibrated in millimetre and celicious .it is clearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that the Kolkata temperature starts the 20 Celicious in January.it is cooled temperature. Further quarter year temperature increase sharply that is 30 degree.moreover temperature decrease slowly,the temperature less than a 30 degree celicious inJuly,August,and September month. Temperature is levelling-off in last three month the average temperature occurs.after,the gradual fall to nearly 20 degree end of the year again cooled area.
It is crystal clear: the first four month the rainfall occur only 50mm. The precipitation in may month reach 100mm.while the downpour take high percentage middle of the year that across the 300mm. In the October month the downfall only 150 mm.in the last two month the minor hastiness
Overall, it is evident that: monthly precipitation in Kolkata the. High downpour in middle of the year and temperature is higer in may month.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Callibrated in millimetre and celicious .it is clearly and coherently represented...
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...at the Kolkata temperature starts the 20 Celicious in January.it is cooled temper...
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Suggestion: Further,
...us in January.it is cooled temperature. Further quarter year temperature increase sharp...
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...ree.moreover temperature decrease slowly,the temperature less than a 30 degree celic...
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...e less than a 30 degree celicious inJuly,August,and September month. Temperature is lev...
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...nth the average temperature occurs.after,the gradual fall to nearly 20 degree end of...
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...er,the gradual fall to nearly 20 degree end of the year again cooled area. It is c...
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...a. It is crystal clear: the first four month the rainfall occur only 50mm. The preci...
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...n the last two month the minor hastiness Overall, it is evident that: monthly pre...
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... that: monthly precipitation in Kolkata the. High downpour in middle of the year and...
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... of the year and temperature is higer in may month.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4375 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31007239909 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.571722515 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30685568311 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119529361522 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057698474063 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176811814078 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282544715956 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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