It is believed by some that people who work for professions such as doctors or engineers ought to be obliged to only serve in the nation that they trained in, while others believe that these people should work wherever they wish. In my opinion, I concur that people who are employed in professional labor should not be forced to work in a particular country as they can learn more experience in their job career.
On the one hand, doctors can work more easily if they have to work at the facility they have trained at. Professionals are accustomed to the country in which they practiced because occupations requiring experts typically require extensive training before they can perform their professions in practice, so adapting is not a problem. For example, doctor Tim Brady believes that his decision to stay only in the country where he practiced to work is preferable as the environment is more familiar to him.
On the other hand, experts can have more experience throughout their whole career if they go to another country to work. A lot of interesting patients or students are based in numerous countries, such as Bangladesh, which can provide more knowledge for adepts, so they can improve their ability in their major. For instance, a doctor in the United States has found a perfect procedure for one of the deadliest outbreaks only by traveling to India and examining citizens there.
In conclusion, I agree that specialists should be working in their desired country as they can receive more valuable knowledge in their field to advance their skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67976295157 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5586765311 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486392328758 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216679918363 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127984278902 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321373985905 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13540378835 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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