Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that professional jobs including doctors or engineers should be demanded to work domestically where they finished their training. Others hold the view that those people should be free in choosing whether to work in their countries or work abroad. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter for the following reasons.
On the one hand, some people believe that professionals are essential jobs which should be required to work in their countries for the development of its own. To begin with, many countries which are in the innovative era demand labour to support and facilitate the community. To illustrate, in 2015, in America, more than 56% of scientific researchers in the country decided to stay and started working here. After 4 years, the outbreak of calamitous disease Covid-19 has taken away many lives but still America was considered to be one of the top-notch countries to repel it. In order to have today, researchers have created vaccines to prevent any further outspreading. Additionally, this method also helped a lot of citizens to avoid this virus as well as improve the medical field of this country. Therefore, it is likely for some think that professionals should be requested to work internally.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that inhabitants should be free to choose to work inside or outside a country with a better environment to improve themselves. To make this clear, working abroad is also a good opportunity for individuals to seize and improve personal traits. For instance, many Indian doctors decided to travel overseas to Western nations not only for their modernized facilities and a decent income but also for a place that has a competitive environment with peer pressure them to compete. Thus, over 70% of responses of doctors in Mumbai city reported that they got broadened their minds about various treatments from all over the world to enhance their grasp. Moreover, gaining knowledge from other regions also helps them install and construct modern facilities that are beneficial for their countries. Thus, landing adequate jobs in other countries would be an incredible option to bring back goods.
In conclusion, after the aforementioned reasons, despite some advantages of working inside a country, there is no doubt that freedom in choosing to work in other lands would advance their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15064935065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79168705504 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0505838226 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.647058824 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380589404234 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124056502632 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122520837812 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243536871521 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110917869215 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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