Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A group of people argue that medical professionals and engineers should perform their job in the nation from where they graduated, whilst there are others who opine, working in any area is their choice. Although the government has invested a large sum of capital in preparing skilled manpower, I believe that they should not be bounded to a specific area as they have freedom of choice and expect better exposure.
A huge amount of investment is required to teach medical and engineering professionals. After completion of the training, they should have to serve their own country. There are limited doctors and engineers in many parts of the country, as the medical and construction fields are fundamental. While to fulfil this shortage of skilled manpower, those graduates should work in their own country. For instance, the government of Nepal offers MBBS and Bachelor in engineering scholarships to fulfil the labour shortage in the country.
Meanwhile, every individual has their own freedom to choose their working area. Moreover, after they graduated from the university, they become ambitious to expand their horizons in the related field. Furthermore, every doctor, engineer, and other highly skilled professionals expect more amenities around them. If their country can not offer them this, they should have the right to select their favourable area or another country as well. For example, many doctors and engineers move abroad every year for better opportunities and for their exposure, which is lacking in their own countries.
In conclusion, the government invests huge money to graduate doctors and engineers; however, I believe that they have the right to choose their favourable working area based on their profession and choice as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3273381295 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74910763243 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521582733813 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8959461153 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346267724962 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125402709617 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744639895251 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222766348672 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689028798402 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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