A group of people argues that, if any person with different professions like medical and technical has to work in the same nation from where they graduated, others have a different view and opine that they have the right to choose their preferred country for work. Although they can earn huge respect from their own citizens in that country, I believe that there should be no restriction on working in other countries.
Every profession has their own right to choose their preferred country for working wisely, there should not be any restrictions to work in the same nations from where they get trained. Some people want to change countries because of low income and insufficient equipment. For example, in Nepal, many medical doctors want to go abroad for better salaries. They invest a huge amount of money while studying, but after getting jobs, they have to work on a very low budget, which makes them choose foreign countries.
On the other hand, working in the same nation makes them well-known people. People who had been living in the same country from their childhood, and finally when they are able to work in their relevant fields in the same homeland, it helps them to gain huge respect from their own residences. It will be a proud moment for them to serve their time for their own people. Each and every citizen will recognize them, and for doing any things, for example, if a person has to check their health problems, then they will definitely search their own local doctor instead of other doctors. It will help them earn good money and respect.
In conclusion, people can get huge respect from their own citizens, which will be a proud moment for them if they work in their own nation, however, in order to maintain their life, earning good money is still at the top of the list. I believe that every profession has the right to choose their preferred country of work.
- More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 56
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 73
- The chart shows coffee production in four countries from 1990 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 73
- An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage of our natural environment What are the causes and solutions 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7303030303 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29865014088 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7864875614 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320881139893 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138440291744 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875377958986 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24984161332 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690155909443 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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