Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are many doctors, engineers,..are created and studied abroad. Some believes that those people shoud work in the country they studied in before while opinions say that they can work in everywhere they want. I think both of opinions are correct, this essay will discuss both of views and give my opinion.
In term of the first opinion, some people believe that professionals should work in the country that they studied because what they learn in that country will be most useful when applied there. The lessons they learn in college or university are built on life in that country, so they work in that country to apply what they've learned. For example, as a gastroenterologist in Germany, he'll mostly learn about the German digestive system, so it's easier for him to work in Germany than in another country.
On the second opinion, some people think that vocationals can work everywhere they like, maybe because this helps them experience and gain experience.Working and studying in many different countries helps people learn more new things, learn about different cultures and so on. As a case of this point,an architect studies and works in many different places. In each country he learned a different architecture, later when his career was stable, he had in himself a rich experience and knowledge of all kinds of architecture.ferent countries helps professionals gain experience for themselves, helping them discover new knowledge.
In conclusion, both of two different opinions mean right, work in the country that professionals studied helps them have the best application way while work in different countries helps people gain experience and learn more new knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21978021978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96581171447 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509157509158 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9659073077 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332889784336 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151036590171 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128051388738 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225264099286 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862549304774 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.