some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals think that public libraries are not necessary and rest of people contradict about above opinion.This essay intends to analyze both perspective.In the following essay I will state my opinion.
On the one side,people who hold their view that libraries are not used over the internet.In this technological life humans wonder into the social sites because of the web pages have all the up to date information and they can get any of explanations. As a result, all the individuals might be read and research for their reference.Moreover, time is very crucial in this fast pace life.Likewise,some individuals want to save their time and do not waste their energy to find resources which are time consuming. Hence,they disagree to go into the state libraries while they need to research something and they would be save their time from the social sites for surfing.
However, other human beings opine that public libraries are needful for reading.When people do not have any technical resources for read whichever they want,then government places are one of their useful center for cultivate some knowledge.As a result, they might be become a knowledgeable person without some social sites.What is more, researchers can inculcate more explanations without any destruction. When researcher want to research on specific topic,then because of state libraries become more peaceful space for them without any disturbance.As a result,libraries may become essential for their own place.
In conclusion,it appears to me that state libraries could not become an only one place because of over surfing internet.Apart from, time is an essential part for every mankind so they do not want to go into the libraries.However, public libraries can not vanish totally so some persons who want to go for cultivate proficiency for a specific reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02580645161 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66515652696 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4663635153 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229230146806 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080103886146 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701061003793 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160103674994 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655070913741 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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