the diagram below shows how a mechanical arm works, and how the joints that make up- the arm function in the same way as those in a human arm. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The following layout illustrates that how mechanical organ works similar as the human organs work.
Overall,illustration determines the computer, motors and other mechanical machines which functions do the same thing clearly likewise human's arm, shoulder, and wrist can do.Alternatively end effectors also can be replaced by some computerized machines.
Firstly,the most effective machine is the computer-precision control of motor which has all the process data and other digital connectors like keyboard and CPU.Meanwhile, the three motors have been connected with computer because of process maintenance.Moreover,these all motors are mechanically assembled with bbase which is occasionally movable like humans.
Secondly,the base is a main feature for robotic function like human such as spray paint,drill holes, and weld metal.base has a shoulder which works as human's shoulder.Likewise, human can raise the hands with the help of shoulders.Subsequently,base's shoulder can raise as well as lowers its arm.Apart from,pivot is the enables arm to rotate the base which is examine the space where to be rotate the arm.What is more,like human's elbow can mould the arm, computerized elbow also is flexible.It can move anywhere whichever it wants.Lastly,gripper is also a main part of the base because of the sensors control force,it might be done for spray paint,drill holes and welding the metal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72596153846 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97221011749 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.731724365 43.030603864 497% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.75 112.824112599 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 22.9334400587 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 5.23603664747 621% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183479481936 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107912185925 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597931730717 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107912185925 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597931730717 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.2329268293 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 61.2550243902 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.3012195122 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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