Some people believe that purchasing imported agriculture products has a positive effect. Other think consuming domestic products is better.
There are conflicting views about the expenditure on agricultural products from other countries or local goods. It is a common belief that people should buy fruits that were imported. However, I firmly support that purchasing domestic commodities is beneficial.
Some people believe that though purchasing imported agriculture, people can eat various types of fruit. Importing products can not be grown domestically which lead to an increase in inhabitants' choice. For instance, kiwifruit is very difficult to grow in Viet Nam, so few farmers plant that kind of fruit. As a result, there is a limited supply of domestically sourced. Luckily, imported fruit abroad is prevalent nowadays, and they have appeared in most markets.
On the other hand, I would argue that buying domestic products is the best way to protect local farmers. Numerous goods imported are really cheap. When these low-priced products hit the market, they drive prices down to a level that can not be matched by farmers. Consequently, they will not gain any profit after a year. A good example occurred in France, market imported dairy products from Spain, the locals simply could not deliver to market prices that were competitive with imports. This led to farmers going out of business
To sum up, while it is apparent that consuming imported fruit is the way to increase consumer's choice, it is undeniable that expending local agriculture products is more priority.
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- the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 82
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- The government should sometimes infringe on people s freedom for security of society To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22844827586 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73882647891 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5107187274 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330751428693 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982759234685 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713287873266 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194819088123 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283903510221 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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