Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish, while other would argue that rehabilitation is its primary role.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, each offender should be given a punishment in the jail, for some people, it is agreeable while the others think that the best option to deal with that is rehabilitation. Prison is the best choice since it could make the rules breaker regret their fouls. While the rehabilitation could make people repair their mindset. While I stand for the rehabilitation since we could give the person better understanding to do not act a same criminal case.
Firstly, Bring the rules breakers to the jail is an option that could give a regret feeling to the rules breaker, since the condition of the prison life which is totally different with their normally life that can push themselves for preventing a same case that could bring them to the prison for the second time. Based on the research from the police office in the USA, the rules breaker are tending to avoid to break the rules and do some violation after finishing their sentence in the jail. Moreover, the jail is the right place since the violators are not able to have plenty of time for communicating that could make them focused on their punishment.
Secondly, Recovering the violators is also the right way to fix them. By rehabilitation, the rules breaker could be repaired with a right way which are not affecting their mental. Furthermore, they also could do something useful for their self and managing new hopes for their life. For example, major of the rules breaker who are sentenced to be rehabilitated have more hopes to be repaired themselves since the situation support them to repair and regret their foul to be a better human being in the next occasion.
In conclusion, the jail and rehabilitation process are both beneficial to the violators, since the jail makes the breaker might regret their problem and the rehabilitation could repair the characteristic of the violators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
...the best choice since it could make the rules breaker regret their fouls. While the r...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e the rules breaker regret their fouls. While the rehabilitation could make people re...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding doing'.
Suggestion: understanding doing
...n since we could give the person better understanding to do not act a same criminal case. Firstly,...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
...that could give a regret feeling to the rules breaker, since the condition of the pri...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
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...way to fix them. By rehabilitation, the rules breaker could be repaired with a right ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
...r their life. For example, major of the rules breaker who are sentenced to be rehabil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89841269841 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74580235761 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6565359911 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871446005146 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440145994695 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449692546244 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704865292693 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567389368845 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.