Technology dominates human life today. It has been inter woven in our routine life. Technology has Revolution each and every fields like medical, business, education, and so on. People thinking big difference of Technology between poor and rich people. Therefore before commenting on my decision both the opinion would be discussed.
Initially, the primary argument is the advancement Technology has increased the in the present day and it is a prejudice on individuals personal life. In addition, we are very increasing into the medical science in the todays due to the advancement Technology, however we have some surgery tools available. The strongest example, recently the Corona pandemic runs into the every country and it is a make a global issue, in spite of India have make a coronavirus medicine which is big improvement into the medical science. The final statement, some people have computer or Android phone which is keep a direct connect with the Global world and become helpful in the education.
On the other hand, other believed that the reach have a more beneficial to have modern. Rich people are get some effective treatment or medicine such as cancer, liver problem hard transfer who can uses the expensive tools. Secondly, a lot of expensive items that poor person cannot purchased. Such as, the Canada company Tesla make a new electricity car, however that car price is around 80 lakhs which price do not inevitable for Poor person.
In conclude and give my opinion, I would say that the new technology is make life very enjoyable and luxurious, so I gives views and seems it is a big gap between rich and poor people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68021462074 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1876519917 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28204847451 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881273644586 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802076385629 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15436689492 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020224061037 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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