Palazzo rounded by advertising which has an increase in effect on our life do you think the positive effects of the outweigh the negative effects.
Advertising is a key part of modern world. Ads is more important for big companies and industries for selling their products. I believe ads do effects on our regular base of life and i think it is more marites compare than demerits.
To initiate with, advertising is a form of modern art and all people can see the ads in everywhere by internet, roadside, tv, mobile phones and many more. Every people can be know about the all products through publicity. Next, companies needs to tell customer about their things by ads and i perspective without advertising we would have less choice. In addition, without advertising there can be increased ratio of unemployment. For instance, the advertising provides and creates more employment opportunity for many talented people like painters, photographers, models, singers and people working in different advertising agencies.
On the contrary, many times it is gives more focus on the branded products. I believe children can be easily influenced by ads and children put pressure on parents to buy them things. Many times, cost of the expenditure increased behind it. The strong example in these phenemena, people put holding in our surrounding area and expenditure has increased which is not convenient for small businessman. Similarly, advertising can be bed perks on the children and youth icon such as, it gives ads about the liquor and tobacco which can lead major effects on the children behaviour.
To sum up, my opinion on par with that advertising is an inevitable role play into the Global market. Otherwise, without ads people can be hard to sell their products. Therefore, i believe it's provided positive as well as negative effects on our social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08896797153 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86823026424 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0443791582 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199401865515 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677006467796 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865556280079 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138548448677 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563250985952 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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