Some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As part of international community, we tend to be familiar that developed countries give the economic assistance for developing countries. However, giving of other assistance beside financial aspect also lead good support for developing countries. This essay illustrates some reasons why I am personally agree with the statement.
The purpose of providing economic assistance to developing countries is only give short term of benefits. Although financial is likely support the infrastructure of countries, this might not solve the problem for long term. For instance, when the developed country such as United States offered the South African financial aid to improve their education facility, however it only build the facility and infrastructure not for the continuation impact to development of Africa’s education. As the teachers, literature and other things are also main aspect to increase the education system. Hence, the financial support does not give impact for the country development thoroughly.
Developed countries are able to transfer knowledge and technology to prevent developing countries become dependence. This way might attempt poorer countries become self-reliant, as it citizens provided knowledge by richer countries to improve their human resources. For example, Japan has signed agreement to share technology knowledge to Indonesia. The knowledge of advanced technology might increase the capability and skill of Indonesia’s people, furthermore, the development of human resources allow to escalate the income of country with their industry, education, and health sector . Thus, this form of assistance is likely give long term benefits for the country’s growth.
In summary, while there is advantage to economic assistance given by developed country, however there is other assistance tend to help the developing countries solve their problem. In my view, the other assistance is likely give more advantages to support the development of poorer countries than financial assistance it self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82828282828 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.042662065 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511784511785 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9734090909 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189818682218 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790480874404 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047720432013 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12672507945 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231853379326 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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