Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

Certainly, school is a place where children learn a lot after their parents. Some people consider that school teacher should not give assignment to their students. However, other say that homework is necessary to prepare education. I will be discussed both side of view in the upcoming paragraphs
To commence with, according to the people who think that homework should not give by teacher because children do study almost seven hours in day. So, they feel strees after the school classes. While, children should take other activities and prepare their own skill as study. It can be possible if they will not get any type of homework from their teacher. Further, they can spend their too much time with their family and other society people thereby they get information about how can give respect to other seniors
On the other hand, some people believe home work is important for school children since when children attend their class and .after a while ,they they may forget that thing which they learnt in the class the is why they should take assignment to do revision their lessons. Moreover, it is very helpful to get good score in their exam since they can learn lessons from assignments
In my point of view, homework is very important. When student give their exam then they cannot easily remember lesson which did learned 8n class. So, homework will be helped to do revision lesson as well as they do not become lazy if they get homework
To sum up. It can be said that teacher should give homework,.but, very small then they can play other activities since that are also very important

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71014492754 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17856989139 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496376811594 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 276.0 20.2975951904 1360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1300.0 106.682146367 1219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 276.0 20.7667163134 1329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 7.06120827912 1445% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34222919348 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.34222919348 0.084324248473 406% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217580565354 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917670340546 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.8 13.0946893788 1060% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.74 50.2224549098 -382% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 108.6 11.3001002004 961% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.16 8.58950901804 223% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 112.4 10.1190380762 1111% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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