Some people believe that scientific research should be carried out by government only not by private companies. To what extent do you agree?
Scientific experiments are indispensable for all new discoveries. In the contemporary world, many government bodies and private corporations perform research at their facilities. A vast majority of the general public has opposite views about the involvement of private companies into science research platforms. I am in consummate accord with the notion that only governments should be allowed to be perform research projects.
First and foremost reason for such an ideology is safety. Publicly funded Laboratories are specifically designed and constructed for scientific purposes and are far more safer to deal with critical experimental materials. Most of the times the Government funded buildings and labs are equipped with state of the art safety features. These organizations also contain more operating capital to implement safety regulations. All of the research work involves careful and safe handling of dangerous chemicals, live specimens, and radioactive materials; therefore, can jeopardize public health if safety policies are not strictly followed. More often, private institutions do not have such an infrastructure and accidents remain at the brink of happening. For example, One private hospital in India exposed number of children to the HIV virus during a clinical trail.
Secondly, Private multinational corporations envision profit out of their research outcome. Nearly all big businesses endeavour to patent their research products and make billions of dollars by selling those products. For instance, various drug manufacturing companies invent drugs under their own control and supervision then later sell the medicines at very high cost. This is because the millions of people in developing nations are deprived from necessary medical treatment.
To encapsulate, I believe if the imperative scientific discoveries are carried out under the government control then people can benefit from safer techniques and highly valuable research outcomes.
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Suggestion: safer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86111111111 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07618509483 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7429058242 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232713275561 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665137341975 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685721786153 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149023488368 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756040132624 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.