Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree.
Undoubtedly, poverty stricken countries lag behind in terms of imperative development factors such as health care facilities, educational resources and foreign trade with other countries. A better-developed medical care system, well structured educational networks and enhanced international business can play indispensable role towards development of poorer nations. I am in consummate accord with the notion that prosper countries should come forward and assist underdeveloped countries in development of these key elements.
Vast majority of impoverished countries can raise their development index if their people have better hospitals, more efficient schools and universities. To illustrate this fact we can examine United Nations living quality survey ranking of countries, which states that some of poorest African countries like Congo score lowest in health and education and hence are at the bottom of the ranking. Moreover, many poor countries do not have access to international business markets and their foreign capital inflow is at minimal. This can be examined in analysing number of trade partners of France as compared to India. India has less international trade value than France despite of its larger size and more population.
More importantly, wealthy nations should come forward and endeavour to help poorer countries with medical supplies, proper and high-tech educational techniques. Rich countries and provide pandemic diseases vaccines such and Ebola and save thousands of lives. Also, poverty-ridden parts of the world can benefit if the imports and exports with developed world is on the rise. In flow of foreign currency will provide necessary economic boost to those countries.
To encapsulate, I believe poor countries can have definite advantages if their overall economy is reinforced and living conditions of their general public are improved with the help of other well to do countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71777003484 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01875709758 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3325138135 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173415907022 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598612422449 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505449336315 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104398152346 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366255004172 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.