some people believe that social networking sites(eg.facebook) had huge negative impacts on individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
many people say that social networking sites have a massive negative influence on both individual and society . however, despite the potential risk the social network can pose, I would believe that they does exert more beneficial effect on almost every single individual.
The begin with,there are several disadvantages of social networking sites. The first one is that some network sites contain violent contents, which could cause negative influence on the development of childrens' mind. Once becoming a victim of cyber bulling, minors are likely to suffer anxiety, depression or even suicide. The second drawback is that some social media account convey distorted information . This could lead the reader to misunderstanding and confusing . For example, in 2016 ,a Facebook account posted a wrong information about Ebola virus disease. As a result, a huge number of reader was confused and scared by that liar .
however, I would agree that although social technology can have some drawbacks, it is not absolutely harmful for people. Firstly, they provide a wide range of useful knowledge in many majors. Take my university friend like an example, he got the highest score of my class in chemical just merely by studying himself on a website called "svsadv.com".Secondly, social network is a chance for making friends and communicating work ??? online. Specially, with cutting-edge technology, we are allowed to talking in a vicarious meeting place without going outside. Thirdly, social media provide an excessive amount of mental entertainment activites in order to help individual balance their mind after their hectic work schedule.
In conclusion, while I agree that some disadvantages of social networking is still exist, I would disagree with the opinions that they always cause huge negative impact on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59219858156 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22709034663 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1971092195 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705927763385 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686968287273 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154994254333 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515618166904 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.