Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people claim that museums should charge for the visiting. while it is true that visiter should be allowed to entry museums without paying fee entry, I would believe that it is also necessary to charge for admission.
To begin with, there are several reasons why people should be accepted to visit museums without cost. Firstly, almost people are tend to go historical place when they are not charged any cost. If they have to pay money for visiting museums, they could feel more the sense hesitation in decide to go historical places.Secondly, eliminating the entry cost could encourage the young generations in visiting museums. As a results, they would spend more their attention for preserve historical values.
however , i would agree that we should charge for admission for some reasons. The first reason is the museums need money to recovering the obsoleted products and enhancing the quality of infrastructure, which ensure the preservation history.The second reason for accounting entry fees is that some museums need to promote traditional images for foreigner in approaching the historical values.The other reason is that charging the museums entry cost could raise awareness of local people in treasuring the national identities.
in conclusion, while free for visiting museums brings benefits to some extent, i would believe charging for these activities is better option
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3698630137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76684920902 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.813687909 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255185283986 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126024527967 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725369967824 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180871602796 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582794787813 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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