some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.
Sport is an inflammable subject in school curriculum. Some argue that it is entailed for children in school age while other say that it should be absulotly optional. There are valid opinion on both sides, which will be considered in this essay.
On the one hand, proponents of physical activity in schools say that such activities are important for healthy body and mind, and they help children to be in good condition; physically and mentally. In addition, schools mandate to prepare children for adult life, and future life is not just doing arithmetic. Through physical exercise children learn some ethical principles which are useful for their life, for example, cooperation and competition.
On the other hand, opponents of such activities argue that these are such a wasting time and money, for instance, the amount of time allotted to sport could be spent on other courses such as math, history, or literature. In addition, the money spent on buying sporty equippments should be go into equip laboratory of schools for doing chemical experiments. Furthermore, it is not wisely to force children doing physical activities, because some of them are not sporty and do not have any interest in sport.
In conclusion, I believe the positive outcomes of sport in schools outweigh the negative ones and then it should be considered necessary for children.it should be noted that these positive effects serve as long as variety of activities are given to children to choose from to ensure their interest is high.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gone'?
Suggestion: gone
... on buying sporty equippments should be go into equip laboratory of schools for do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12449799197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71548910262 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550200803213 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4279064008 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333716964675 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139067787155 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707330855748 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215147980131 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597002513614 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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