Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while
others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion
Undoubtedly, sport plays a significant role in the development of children. For example, a kid involving in some activities such as athletics, running can have a positive impact on their academic studies and mind. Apart from that, sport is a great way to occupy children in their spare time, by involving them in various sections and games. Children become persistent to different disease, and sport strengthens up their immune system and overall condition.
In addition, doing sports can assist children to socialize and find prospective friends who share mutual interests.
On the other hand, some people reckon sport should be on the basis of preference. First of all, allocating time on sport activities might distract child from being focused solely on academic subjects. Therefore, resulting children in failing behind on main disciplines and studies.
Secondly, people consider it is to be a big problem, since sport activities can have a negative effect on kids’ health, who have health issues, such as asthma, blood pressure, heart diseases and etc.
Additionally, children might have a couple of accidents of injury, by doing sports, especially gymnastics, soccer and martial arts. The believe, that there is a high possibility of breaking parts of body.
In my point of view, sport should be balanced with academic disciplines. I strongly believe that children should take sport and physical exercise as an extracurricular activity, which will have a profound effect on their psychological and physical condition. Nevertheless, there has to be an equal contribution to both.
- Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, whileothers feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... asthma, blood pressure, heart diseases and etc. Additionally, children might have a co...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly gymnastics, soccer and martial arts. The believe, that there is a high possibility of br...
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Line 6, column 137, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ymnastics, soccer and martial arts. The believe, that there is a high possibility of br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, apart from, as to, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42570281124 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97243563816 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622489959839 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6557808909 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219536872712 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774231144745 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455026372888 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103593360575 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562783105909 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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