Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
After accomplishing study high school program, young students frequently consider that they should keep going in higher study or just find a job as soon as they can. Many people believe that continuing to study at university or college will be the best way to reach a successful career, whereas others believe that getting a job right after graduation is a better idea.
Working after finishing high school is some ways bringing benefits to the young. Firstly, young people will have a chance to settle down as soon as possible by earning money from working early. It also might make the youth to be mature and independent earlier with their own income than others who still choose to go to university or college. Secondly, they can have opportunities to be promoted in their career more rapidly than those who would rather pursuing higher education. This will save much more time to obtain and gain as much real experience as they can and so do skills in their chosen major career.
On the other hand, there are a variety reasons why the young should choose to go to university or college after school. First, a university or a college could give people a lot more expert knowledge in their chosen major with a higher-level qualification more than just high school graduation. This is also the expectation of most of young employees nowadays. Moreover, spending time and attempt in higher-level education brings to people more opportunities to get a high salary right after they graduate university or college due to the reason that the job market is getting tougher for the freshers. Furthermore, having a degree or diploma in specific field with a lot of advanced skills are apparent advantages to stand out among numerous applicants who chase the top jobs. For instance, in Vietnam, students with an engineering or information technology degree are often easily get a good job and highly paid.
In conclusion, it seems obvious that both choices are having great different advantages for the young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 598, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...ey can and so do skills in their chosen major career. On the other hand, there are a...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...t more expert knowledge in their chosen major with a higher-level qualification more ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...uation. This is also the expectation of most of young employees nowadays. Moreover, spending ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95548961424 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67831730416 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5649905887 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281189600302 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093774341617 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121058469792 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173145876474 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146229849438 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 598, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...ey can and so do skills in their chosen major career. On the other hand, there are a...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...t more expert knowledge in their chosen major with a higher-level qualification more ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...uation. This is also the expectation of most of young employees nowadays. Moreover, spending ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95548961424 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67831730416 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5649905887 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281189600302 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093774341617 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121058469792 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173145876474 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146229849438 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.